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Friday, November 14, 2025

A Change

A French Trench in the Village of Souchez, Artois, France, 18 December 1915
Francois Flameng
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Louis was with a detail of men sent back to the village, it was his squad's turn to go back and collect the platoon's rations. There would be potatoes, the inevitable rice, some form of meat (beef, mutton, or pork), and perhaps some vegetables like carrots or, better yet, onions. If they were fortunate, there would be fresh bread, if not, then hardtack biscuits would be issued.

Once they brought all that back, the men would prepare their soup, more like a stew if they had the right ingredients. Yesterday's soup had been weak indeed, the last of the vegetables had been tossed in, mostly carrots, some rice, and then the men had crumbled their hardtack in as well to thicken the broth. Today, Louis hoped, that would be different.

"Fattening us up they are," the Baron had grumbled.

"We need more meat on our bones now that winter seems to have set in, or do you have the pulse of the general staff?" the sergeant scoffed at the Baron.

"I'm just saying, those fellows on the other side of no-man's-land have been rather quiet since they attacked the other day, and that was half-hearted at best," the Baron shook his head, the sergeant always doubted his instincts.

"I tell you, Sergeant, do you think the brass didn't notice that the attack was weak and disorganized? They'll be putting on their thinking caps and coming to the conclusion that now would be a good time to attack them. Tit for tat, you know? One doesn't need to be Jomini to figure that out."

Later, as they were returning to their dugout, Louis had asked the Baron who Jomini was.

"Ah, a staff officer and he was also a writer on military strategy, a Swiss fellow as I recall. Served during Napoléon's time, first with the Emperor then later with the Russians."

"So he was a traitor?"

"Yes and no, in the old days loyalties could shift depending on one's nationality. Jomini came from an old Swiss family. Even Marshal Bernadotte, a Frenchman, once he became king of Sweden, turned his coat and fought against Napoléon. Now he was a traitor, not a very good general from what I understand."

"So why did Napoléon make him a general?" Louis asked, puzzled.

"To satisfy the old republicans, the sans culottes¹. Apparently when Bernadotte died and they were preparing the body for burial the Swedes were rather distraught at his 'Death to Kings' tattoo." The Baron chuckled as he said that.

"Really?" Louis asked as he wondered what having no pants had to do with anything.

"I don't know about the tattoo, but it's a good story and old Bernadotte didn't care much for old King Louis."

"How do you know so much?"

"Well, I went to school, didn't you?"

"The village school taught me to read and write, do some arithmetic, and say my prayers, that's about it."

"Ah, did the nuns teach you?"

Louis got a dark look on his face, then nodded, "I didn't like them, still don't."

"Ah, a rebel then, like me I suppose."

"Are you really a rebel, Baron?"

"Well, the sergeant thinks so, the lieutenant likes me, of that I'm sure."

One of the squad came in to the dugout, "Come on down to 1st Squad's dugout, soup's on!"


That night Louis stayed out on the firing step well past sundown. The fresh, cold air seemed to clear his head, he could look out at the snow-covered no-man's-land and almost imagine he was back home. Then he heard something out there, a slight "clink," the sound of metal on metal.

He crouched a bit lower and looked out over the snow, there was a bit of a moon tonight so he could see better than when it was overcast. With the snow on the ground everything seemed very clear. But there were shadows as the moon passed behind the clouds and when that happened, he heard something again.

He reached for the flare gun, and as he did he nearly jumped out of his skin when he felt a hand on his arm. Then the Baron's voice hissed in his ear, "Not yet lad, your instincts are good, but it might be one of our patrols returning and they're a little off course. Wait a moment."

Then they both heard another "clink" and the sound of a voice speaking low but clearly in a foreign language.

"Fire the flare," the Baron told him.

Louis fumbled with it at first, then got it ready and lifted the gun to the sky, squeezing the trigger as he did so. The brightness blinded him momentarily, by the time he recovered his vision, firing had broken out up and down the line.

In the light of the flare as it fell to earth, swinging from its parachute, the squad saw men in no-man's-land, and from the shape of their helmets, the Baron knew they were the enemy so he had given the order to fire himself as he fired simultaneously with his bellowed command.

Louis shook his head, looking out into the returned darkness, he looked sheepishly at the Baron. "What happened?"

"Enemy patrol, probably trying to snatch one of us as a prisoner. Nice job spotting them, Louis, we'll make a soldier of you yet."

"Did we get all of them?"

"Who knows? The survivors, if there were any, are probably back in their own lines now, changing their underwear no doubt. You gave them a scare they won't forget."

Then they heard the lieutenant's voice, "Who fired that flare?"

Louis started to answer when the Baron said, "It was Louis, he heard something in no-man's-land, reached for the pistol, but I made him wait until we were sure. Then I let him shoot the flare."

The lieutenant gave the Baron a sideways glance, then clapped Louis on the shoulder, "Nicely done, soldier. Good work. Baron, come with me, please."


The Baron returned to find Louis still on the firing step, "You should get some sleep, lad. The sun will be up before you know it."

Louis nodded, but asked, "What did the lieutenant want?"

The Baron sighed, "We didn't get off scot-free during that ruckus. Someone out there did get a shot off, which hit our sergeant."

"Is he okay?"

"No, he's not. The bullet hit him square in the forehead, the idiot wasn't wearing his helmet, otherwise he might have had a chance."

"I heard that bullets will go right through a helmet." Louis said.

"Usually, but sometimes the steel will deflect the bullet enough so that you just get a bad headache. But if you're not wearing one at all, well, a wool cap certainly won't stop a bullet."

"My God ..." Louis groaned, "will we get a new sergeant?"

"We already have one, lad."

"We do?"

"Yes, you're looking at him."

Louis thrust his hand out, "Congratulations, Baron, you ..."

"Don't do that. I didn't want it, the lieutenant insisted."

"You didn't want it?" Louis was puzzled.

"No, now instead of just you, I'm responsible for the whole damned squad. It's a big job, I didn't want it. Now go to bed, this time it's an order."

Louis did as he was told, but he didn't hide his grin as he entered the dugout. He felt sure that the Baron would do a good job. Then he realized, here he was celebrating, completely forgetting that a good man had died to give the Baron the job.

Try as he might, Louis again had trouble going to sleep.

He had a thought before drifting off, "What could possibly be worse than war?"




¹ The sans culottes were members of the lower classes who were fiercely opposed to the aristocracy. Their name stems from the fact that they wore long trousers, pantalons, as opposed to the culottes (silk knee breeches) of the aristocracy.

24 comments:

  1. The Baron seems unusually well educated for a private soldier. Well, maybe he learned from stories his grandfather told.

    Potatoes, rice, muddy water, limp carrots, sad onions. Maybe a bone of mutton or horse - tossed in whole to flavor it all, then the bouilli (meat) cut up and doled out alongside the bouillion.

    Louis is getting a look at the contradictions of war. What could be worse? Losing one.

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    1. Sounds like you've made a camp soup/stew yourself, more than once I gather.

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    2. You haven't lived until knowing the delight of fresh pine needles thrown into your sad gruel.

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    3. Wait ... What? You got pine needles? Damn, I was in the wrong outfit.

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  2. Trenches.....day after day, night after night, wet....snow....cold....my paternal grandfather served in the US Army during the Great War, I never heard him talk about that time of his life Sarge.

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  3. "What could be worse than war".... that's a good question.

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  4. Sarge, I cannot imagine the amount of tension having to make the decision to begin or not begin an attack on a unit that is of unknown origin. I stress trying to merge into traffic.

    "What could be worse than war?" The question few serious ask.

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    1. For those at headquarters it's just moving pins on a map. Those who have to execute those decisions have a far more stressful time of it.

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  5. "What could be worse than war?" The quote attributed to John Stuart Mill comes to mind...

    “War is an ugly thing, but not the ugliest of things: the decayed and degraded state of moral and patriotic feeling which thinks that nothing is worth a war, is much worse. When a people are used as mere human instruments for firing cannon or thrusting bayonets, in the service and for the selfish purposes of a master, such war degrades a people. A war to protect other human beings against tyrannical injustice; a war to give victory to their own ideas of right and good, and which is their own war, carried on for an honest purpose by their free choice, — is often the means of their regeneration. A man who has nothing which he is willing to fight for, nothing which he cares more about than he does about his personal safety, is a miserable creature who has no chance of being free, unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself. As long as justice and injustice have not terminated their ever-renewing fight for ascendancy in the affairs of mankind, human beings must be willing, when need is, to do battle for the one against the other.”

    I've always particularly liked "A man who has nothing which he is willing to fight for, nothing which he cares more about than he does about his personal safety, is a miserable creature who has no chance of being free, unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself. "

    Boat Guy

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    1. And there it is, John Stuart Mill was spot on in that assessment!

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    2. BG, reminds me of "The Wind and the Lion,"

      [last lines]
      Sherif of Wazan: Great Raisuli, we have lost everything. All is drifting on the wind as you said. We have lost everything.

      Raisuli: Sherif, is there not one thing in your life that is worth losing everything for?
      [they both begin to laugh]

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  6. This episode reminds me of the young Indiana Jones and his friend Rene. They fought for the Belgiums, the French, later the Boer.

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    1. Rick #1 - I need to rewatch that, it rings a bell somewhere in the dusty caverns of memory.

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  7. Sarge,
    Man! This would make an excellent historical fiction novel! Keep up the good work!
    juvat

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  8. This was done on my birthday, December 18. One week from Christmass and two weeks from New Years. Been a long time ago that reality was made. That was the same date that Nam was starting to finish, however we did not know it would finish on the 27th of January 1973. Then about two years later it was taken over by the commies libturds. So, what was all the blood, time, materials and money spent for? Anyone?
    Heltau

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