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Louis awakened to a hand gripping his shoulder and shaking him.
"Stay awake, lad. Far too easy to slip off and die in this cold."
The Baron's teeth were chattering, he too was as cold as he'd ever been. Louis had a thought, "Why not just slip away? Can death be any worse than this, freezing in the mud of no-man's-land?"
"Something is going on, lad. Can you hear it?"
"I can't hear anything." Louis moaned as he rolled onto his belly.
"That's just it, no machine gun fire, no artillery firing, it's almost as if the war is over. Maybe we're dead and we just don't know it." The Baron's face was turned to the German lines, he was fully alert now.
"If we're dead than we must surely be in Hell." Louis moaned.
The major turned to his men, "Come on boys, keep moving. The first wave has seized a section of Boche trench and we need to reinforce them before the Germans counterattack. Move carefully but quickly!"
The infantrymen carefully picked their way through the debris and detritus of no-man's-land. One of them, a senior corporal, spotted something in a nearby shell hole, "Sir! Two of our boys over here, I think they're alive."
The man nearly jumped out of his skin when one of the bodies he'd spotted rolled towards him and said, "Of course we're still alive, is the war over?"
"Can you still fight?" The major asked the Baron, who was covered in mud and was shaking with the cold.
"Just give us a minute to stretch, we've been lying in the muck since this morning. We're stiff with cold."
The major nodded and shouted over to a sergeant, "Give these men some brandy, Sergeant Loiseul, then follow us forward as fast as you can."
"Yes Sir!"
The Baron and Louis climbed out of the shell hole and each took the proffered flask. The Baron took a long pull, wiped his mouth with the muddy sleeve of his greatcoat, then handed the flask to Louis. The younger man took a swig, then coughed.
"Damn, what is that?"
"Sorry it's not up to your standards, boy. But that's the best eau de vie we can produce with nothing but what we can find on the local farms. I think we made that with crab apples."
Louis coughed again as he returned the flask to its owner. He could already feel the warmth spreading through him. The taste was nasty, but it seemed to do the trick.
"You ready?" The Baron looked with concern at Louis.
"What are you, his mother?" Sergeant Loiseul growled.
"It's his first time, give him a break." The Baron snapped.
Loiseul shook his head, then snapped, "Follow me, or go home, I don't care."
Louis couldn't believe the number of dead leading to the German trenches. He didn't see anyone he recognized, most of the dead looked crumpled up and sad. Nothing like the paintings always showed. It was obvious that some of these men had died in agony. Others had died as they fell. Bundles of rags and torn flesh that used to be human.
When he climbed into the German trench it was worse. Now he was seeing the enemy for the first time. Though their uniforms were different, their look as they lay where they fell was no different than the dead Frenchmen he'd seen in no-man's-land.
The Baron called to him, "Help us knock down this parados, we also need to build up a firing step. Damn trench is facing the wrong way!"
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He jumped in to help with a will, many of the sergeants were nervous about the Boche coming back. He asked the Baron about that.
"The Germans always counterattack as fast as they can. They know it will take time to consolidate our gains, so they want to hit us before we can do that. It's one of the things that make those bastards so dangerous."
Louis went back to work, he noticed that most of the mud which had clung to him was now dry and falling away as he wielded a shovel. He also noticed that the rain had stopped, apparently it had stopped some time ago, he just hadn't noticed.
Then he heard a shout from down the line, "Here they come!"
He grabbed his rifle, mimicking the actions of the more experienced soldiers around him. Oddly enough he wasn't scared, he was irked that the Boche were interrupting his work on the trench.
Odd that.


Survived the foray into no-man's land and now into the enemy trenches......reading this before the boiler kicks in this early with the outside temp at 21 above, excellent writing Sarge.......:)
ReplyDelete21, yep, winter has arrived.
DeleteIt's always annoying when someone interrupts your work.
ReplyDeleteEspecially annoying if they seem to want to kill you. Inconsiderate of them. I'll reiterate my second comment from yesterday, Sarge. You may not be quite up to the standard Erich Maria Remarque set, but no more than two steps behind.
Great stuff, Sarge! Can't say I'm a fan of Remarque, though.
DeleteBoat Guy
Joe - Most annoying.
DeleteThanks, BG.
DeleteBG, He does sometimes go on with descriptions, but he also puts you there, in the mud, in the cold, and makes you feel the boredom, fear, uncertainty, and frustration
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DeleteAs Nylon12 said, excellent writing this morning!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rob.
DeleteWell written. The annoying when someone interrupts your work is so true even today. Being interrupted taking care of injured soldiers and civilians generated what we medics called "Drumming up business" until they fled and we could go back to work. it's odd how dissociated you can get bandaging up someone you just shot a moment ago.
ReplyDeleteSomeday I might share a South American medical mission trip in an area I had had to shoot folks. Life is weird like that.
When you're focused on something, it's easy to filter out everything else.
DeleteUntil you can't!
If it's not one thing, it's something else.... And the troops kept on doing this for months or years. Or, at least the survivors did.
ReplyDeleteWell told.
JB
Thanks, JB.
DeleteDump in a barrel of emotions, almost die, stew, freezing in a hole for hours, get in Kraut trenches, work your ass off, get attacked...new cranky attitude. Good storytelling!
DeleteThanks, TM.
DeleteI never thought about what happened after surviving the charge all day. Now I know.
ReplyDeleteAmazing how one can get submersed in a task, no matter what the outward situation. And yes, incredibly annoying to be interrupted.
Annoying indeed.
DeleteNothing like potentially dying to awaken the need for speed, so to speak.
ReplyDeleteYou've done well in describing the trenches.
Muddy, nasty, and smelly.
DeleteNo doubt, soon to learn that the enemy artillery prudently has their own former front trench line accurately mapped and zeroed in.
DeleteMaybe.
DeleteCan't forget the lice, fleas and flies...
DeleteWish we could.
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