Tuesday, May 20, 2025

Over There - Aux Tranchées

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It was cold and it was wet. The march up to the trenches had been nasty, a cold wet rain falling on the men which had hints of snow and ice in it as well. The men had grumbled, as was their wont, which comforted Allen. In his experience, if the men weren't bitching then things were bad indeed.

"Hell, this is better'n Grand Forks in February! I can still feel my legs!"

Sergeant Major Lou Fratello barked out, "Quiet back there! One foot in front of the other and keep the chit chat down to a dull roar."

Allen chuckled, Fratello was a very good man, he kept the men straight but he made sure their morale stayed high. Many times he'd seen the man helping one of the duller privates learn the trade of the soldier. He wouldn't trade Fratello for anyone.

2nd Lieutenant Johnson, on the other hand, he'd let go in a heartbeat. The man couldn't seem to grasp the principles of leadership. When he wasn't ignoring his platoon, he was screaming at them.

"Goddammit, Private! You splashed mud all over me!"

The private in question had slipped on the trail and in attempting to recover his balance had indeed splashed mud all over his lieutenant. Allen stepped out of his place at the head of the column and waited for Johnson's platoon by the side of the track.

Johnson snapped a salute when he saw his company commander, which earned him a nasty look from his platoon sergeant.

"Sergeant Morrisey, go ahead and keep the men moving, your lieutenant is going to be busy for a bit."

"Sir!"


Eberbach had insisted on accompanying Bauer.

"Your brother is dead, and you want to risk your life in no man's land? On a night scout?"

Kurt Eberbach looked intently at his corporal, his oldest friend. "My brother is dead, I can't bring him back. I can't even kill the man who killed him, I'm not a pilot nor do I know who brought him down."

Eberbach looked off into the distance, a grim look on his face.

"So you'll kill some Frenchman for what? Vengeance? Will that make any difference?"

"Don't leave me behind, Kurt. Please."

So now there they were, in a water-filled shell hole, shivering as the water in their place of refuge began to ice over. The rain had changed completely to snow.


"Lieutenant Johnson, you need to act more professionally in front of the men. Screaming because your coat got muddy is petty and childish. You do know that, don't you?"

Johnson looked at the ground then met the eyes of his commander, "Yes Sir, I do. I shall apologize to the man at once."

"You'll do no such thing. The men will perceive that as weakness. Turn it into a joke, make light of it somehow. You do have a sense of humor, don't you?"

Johnson looked off into the distance, "I do Sir, but ..."

"But what?"

"I'm terrified, Sir. I don't want to die. Everything frightens me, I'm a coward, Sir."

Allen looked steadily at the man, "If you weren't afraid I'd have no use for you. Only a mad man would not be afraid. We will be going into battle, perhaps today, perhaps tomorrow, but enter into battle we shall. Every man in the company knows that, we're all afraid, Michael."

"You're afraid, Sir? I doubt that, is the Sergeant Major afraid? I doubt that as well."

"The Sergeant Major and I have seen battle, we've seen men die, men we were close to. We know what it's like, it is very much something to be terrified of, all rational men are terrified of battle, the brave simply hide it better than most. You won't know if you're a coward until you've been shot at."

Johnson swallowed hard, "Thank you, Sir. I will try and do my best."

"That's all anyone can ask, Lieutenant. Now rejoin your platoon."


They entered the trenches just after sunrise. The snow had stopped, but the new-fallen snow covered the ground for as far as the eye could see, softening the devastated landscape. But the men saw the ruined trees, the torn earth under that whiteness.

"Almost looks pretty, doesn't it?" Sergeant Major Fratello observed as he examined the ground towards the enemy lines through his field glasses.

Captain Allen stood there, his feet in the icy water at the bottom of the trench. He wished that he was anywhere but here. "Yeah, Sarn't Major, it's picturesque. Are the men settled in?"

"Yessir, I've got them improving the firing steps, their squad bunkers, anything to keep them busy. Think the Huns will give us a welcoming party?"

A shell whistled overhead then exploded some distance to the rear.

Allen ducked, then said, "I think that's them saying 'hello' now."

"COVER!!" Fratello bellowed as more shells began to impact all around them.

As Allen tried to make himself very small, he had an odd thought, "Welcome to France."



26 comments:

  1. Trench war.......ugh......cold and snow.....more ugh. Reading this effort this morning while hearing the rain drumming on the roof really sets the mood Sarge....just missing the rats......:)

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  2. Felt that cold, where the water creeps into your boots, soaking your socks, "cooling" your whole body. Little shiver/ shudder right between the shoulder blades. Raw, torn earth, human smells...ammonia and sulfur. Mud and crisp snow... I'm there. (not that I'd want to be... but to be there for a day or two) would alter your perception of life.

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    1. For those it didn't end, that portion of the war haunted them for the rest of their lives.

      With good reason ...

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  3. If your feet are happy, you're happy. In trenches your feet were rarely happy.


    ""I'm terrified, Sir. I don't want to die. Everything frightens me, I'm a coward, Sir."" Takes a lot of courage to say that to a superior officer, especially in that day and age.

    Another great piece, Sarge.

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  4. Well done, Sarge! Excellent story.
    juvat

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  5. Once again, Sarge, you've demonstrated your gift to put US "there" and to bring these people to life - for however long they will be "alive".
    Boat Guy

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    1. It's how I remember, and honor, them. Would that my feeble efforts weren't necessary. But war will always be our lot, I fear.

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  6. It is always good to remind myself that some of authors that wrote great things - C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkien - saw exactly this kind of horror and pathos - so that when they wrote about evil and war, they truly understood that perspective.

    Although I had a number of beefs with Netflix's remake of All Quiet on the Western Front (mostly related to changing the storyline, especially at the end), I did think they captured the feeling and sounds and desperation pretty well.

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    1. It was a good film on its own, though I too was annoyed by their alteration of the storyline. At least the cast wasn't "diverse," if you follow my meaning. We saw what we expected to see in the German army.

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  7. Just another average piece from Sarge. But his "average" is totally outstanding every time.
    Well done. Again.

    In better trench neighborhoods, they had "duckboard" sort of like pallets to keep feet above the water level, maybe. Not everywhere, but greatly appreciated for those who enjoyed that small luxury.
    JB

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    1. Thanks, JB.

      Yeah, duckboards helped but had to be replaced periodically. In that environment probably a lot.

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    2. I went to google and images to see what a "duckboard" looked like. Think a homemade pallet.

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    3. Often made from shell crates and ammo crates and, oh, just about any crate.

      One of the many things soldiers have done to make their special little section of Hell somewhat better. With the US, seen in the Revolutionary War, the War of 1812, the Mexican-American War, the Civil War, the Spanish-American War, WWI, WWII, Korea, Vietnam, the various Wars on Terror... And all the little wars in between. I don't think they were used by our side during Grenada or Panama, but pretty much anywhere else we've been and trench warfare or emplacements exist for longer than a day.

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    4. And there was "trench foot" from constantly cold wet feet. A serious cause of casualties in WW1, WW2, and Korea.

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    5. Doesn't have to be cold, aka immersion foot.

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  8. Oh, goody. Trench warfare. Not seen that before he says sarcastically.

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  9. Making home-made hell almost enjoyable. Supurb. Thanks; Sarge.

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