Saturday, June 7, 2025

An Idea ...

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"Your Grace, the King is anxious to hear your response to his request."

The Duke looked for a moment at the messenger, then sighed.

"Isn't a request from a king normally considered a command?"

"Certainly, Your Grace, but His Majesty is not your liege lord, merely a neighbor seeking assistance in a matter which involves both of your interests. So it is indeed a request, not a command."

"Walk with me."

The Duke turned on his heel and walked out towards the battlements. A light snow was beginning to fall.

"Your Grace?"

The Duke looked to see that no one had followed him outside. His retainers were used to his impulses and knew better than to intrude. The Duke often preferred the solitude offered by the ramparts overlooking the surrounding terrain.

"Your King knows very well that the Earl and I have never seen eye to eye. We have both laid a claim to the territory your King now seems to covet. Has he sent an envoy to the Earl as well?"

"I am not privy to such things Your Grace, but it stands to reason that His Majesty may well have sent an inquiry to the Earl as well. But honestly, His Majesty finds the Earl to be such a dreadful bore."

"And I am not?"

The messenger bowed slightly, "It is well known that His Majesty and Your Grace share an interest in certain activities that the Earl does not."

"Drinking and playing at cards? Jousting? Whoring? Which hobbies do you think the King and I share?"

The messenger blushed this time, "Not those things, Your Grace, but the study of war and the history of that most violent of human endeavors."

"I see."

Before the messenger could speak again, the Duke turned abruptly and went back inside. The messenger was glad of that, it was getting cold on the battlements of the Duke's castle.


So the preceding is a rough idea I have for a story. It will be fictional and only loosely based on history, though the castle depicted in the opening photo actually exists. It is the Château de Harzé in Aywaille, Belgium, a country I have a great affinity for.

Though I'm starting vacation soon and don't expect to be writing much, this story has been wandering around in my head looking for a chance to ripen and be presented to the world.

We shall see.


It was late yesterday when I was sitting at my desk, watching another episode of The Tudors when it struck me, I hadn't written anything for Saturday.

Friday had been an excellent day, went out to eat with The Missus Herself, had an excellent dinner, then went home and cut the grass in the coolness of the early evening. No doubt this story has been somewhat inspired by what I've been watching as of late, and things which I've been dealing with in real life. We'll see where this goes.

So a late night Friday idea which might go somewhere, we shall see.

Until next time, my Lords and Ladies, I bid you adieu.



24 comments:

  1. Hey now.......a different historical period.....sounds intriguing Sarge.

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  2. Sarge, go for it, looks interesting so far!
    juvat

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    1. That makes me feel better, I went to bed thinking it wasn't that good.

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  4. You have me hooked! I'm thinking this is a precursor to your story of a stalwart American yeomanry raising up against an oppressive royal caste in Washington.

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  5. I can't imagine living in a time/place where that castle with it's good sized walls built out of stone are needed. A lot of time & capital was spent building that, it had to be really needed... I've been lucky!
    I hope the story comes together for you!

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    1. And then gunpowder came along, making those walls almost useless.

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  6. My wife's addiction to HGTV and similar channels has exposed me to several programs about people restoring castles or chateaus. Sort of interesting for the details about old construction techniques and how [rich] people fiddle with historic objects to make them functional for current tastes and demands. But, the overall impression I get is "Darn, that stuff is REALLY OLD!" Out here on the frontier west, "old" is anything circa 1850 or earlier, while in Sarge's neighborhood, "old" dates to 1620. Down in Florida more like 1565. But these castles/chateaus are 1300-1500 ish.

    We are spoiled with power tools, especially battery powered hand tools. Back then, every cut of wood or masonry was by hand with saw or chisel. No fancy Bobcats for moving dirt, just shovels and wheelbarrows. Need to lift a huge timber or stone to set it in place? Then build a ramp, or maybe construct a derrick of some sort because there are no mobile cranes.

    Yup, modern conveniences are great, and living in olde castles was certainly a different life style.

    My limited exposure to castles and their inhabitants is the timeless "Monty Python and the Holy Grail." We will have to see if Sarge's characters ever utter the words "Run Away!"
    John Blackshoe

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    1. There are a number of clips (and one 4+ hour video, no, I haven't watched it yet) on "how to build a castle. CBS "Sunday Morning" had a clip a while back on a guy rebuilding a medieval castle in France. Cool stuff.

      Not sure I'd want to live in an old castle, too drafty for one thing!

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    2. The French tend to take restoration quite 'seriously'. I was watching a programme about the restoration of a French castle and one of the artisans was saying he would only use tools appropriate to the era of the property he was restoring, so no power tools etc. However having holidayed in France they do take restoration of old properties quite seriously and take steps to train their workers.
      Retired

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    3. Which is as it should be. (Speaking as an amateur antiquarian and historian.)

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  7. When I first read this at the crack of dawn I was struck by a thought you might enjoy, transplant the story like Pournelle did in Janissaries. As I recall that is pretty much what happened with his version. See? Now that you've retired you can broaden those horizons and start to enjoy the broad sweep of history and write about the future or paratime just as you like. :). Or not.

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  8. I don't know that comment above didn't have my handle on it, but it was mine.

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  9. I recently read Barbara Tuchman's 'A Distant Mirror: The Calamitous 14th Century' which covers the century before the Tudors, focusing on the French. Amazing the breadth & depth of death, destruction, wealth, and extravagance. Internecine fighting is a long-standing human pastime, almost an occupation.
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    L.J.

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